Even then I was obsessed with the details of design. A few years later I designed my first pair of shoes , working for hours to perfect each detail, including whether the laces should be mineral white or diamond white. Even then I sensed that minor differences in tonality could make a huge impact and that different colors could evoke different responses.
In high school I moved on to more advanced projects , teaching myself how to take apart, repair, and customize cell phones. Whether I was adjusting the flex cords that connect the IPS LCD to the iPhone motherboard, or replacing the vibrator motor, I loved discovering the many engineering feats Apple overcame in its efforts to combine form with function.
And details are more than details, they can mean the difference between negative and positive infinity, an impossible range of solutions. It is to me. Here, my obsession with details will be as crucial as ever. A one millimeter difference can mean the difference between a successful root canal and a lawsuit. You might notice the first lines are all in bold. Because if you just read those lines in bold the essay still makes sense.
How can this information help you write a better essay? Read the bolded lines aloud. Even if you have no wife. Write a new outline in which all the lines flow together. Like a mini version of your essay. Think of the lines that follow in each paragraph the meat that fleshes out the essay. Kind of a gross image but whatever. Rewrite your paragraphs so that each paragraph fleshes out the topic sentence. And why do I suggest you paste the new outline onto a new document and start over?
And we all know what happened to him. Step away from the essay for at least 30 minutes. Go for a walk, get something to eat, do something else to clear your mind.
Handouts must be printed separately. View this resource in Spanish. When we're ready to share our writing with others, it is important to take time to re-read what we have written to make sure that our message is clear and our spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization are polished. The word re-vision means to "look again. Once a piece has been revised and major changes have been made, successful writers then edit or polish their writing to make certain that readers won't be confused or distracted by unintentional errors.
Read on to find out where to begin in revising and editing any piece of writing! We all know the sense of relief we feel when we finish a draft of writing. For many of us, students and adults alike, returning to a piece of writing to revise and edit can feel discouraging. We've already written the piece, so what is there left to do?
Reading through the following questions and suggestions with young people will not only help them reflect on their writing, but also help them become more self-sufficient in the writing process and better writers. After setting your piece of writing down for a short time, pick it up again, and reflect on the following questions from the perspective of an interested reader:. Learn All Year Long Kids and teens should read and write even when they are out of school. Reading as a Reader After setting your piece of writing down for a short time, pick it up again, and reflect on the following questions from the perspective of an interested reader: Is my purpose for writing clear?
Have I considered the questions and concerns of my audience? Have I written in the form and style appropriate for this genre of writing? For example, does my book review look and read like a book review?
Writing experts generally agree, however, that while details such as grammar and punctuation are important, they are far less important than solid organization, fresh writing, and creative content. The following guidelines are designed to give students a checklist to use, whether they are revising individually or as part of a peer review team.
Rewriting is the essence of writing well—where the game is won or lost. —William Zinsser What this handout is about This handout will motivate you to revise your drafts and give you strategies to revise effectively. What does it mean Continued.
Peer Revising "Peer revising is a common feature of writing-process classrooms, and it is often recommended as a way of providing student writers with an audience of readers who can respond to their writing, identify strengths . Revising your paper is not skimming a paper while watching TV or listening to a CD. Revising is focusing on many elements in your draft.. Does everything in your paper support your thesis, or have you gone off the topic?
Having drafted your essay, you have gained the perspective of hindsight. Was the subject matter more complex than you anticipated? Did your preconceived ideas prove less interesting than discoveries you made while writing? Would you like to revise, but feel uncertain about how to do so? How to revise. TIPS FOR REVISING & EDITING ESSAYS. REVISING = changing the content of your essay. Determine areas where you could add, delete, or move text to make your content more effective. EDITING = finding errors in punctuation, grammar, and spelling and eliminating unnecessary words or phrases.